This is a really
significant picture for me It’s the wedding of my uncle. It was on February
26th the previous night of the earthquake called 27F, in fact we were in the
party when the earthquake started.In this picture there's most of my family, my grandparents, uncles, aunt, cousins, and mainly my great grand mother who passed away last year. At that moment my mother was pregnant with 8 months, we were waiting for Catalina, my little princess. That wedding was in Talagante in a very nice church in the downtown of the city. I don’t remember exactly who took it by I think was the wedding photographer.
One strange thing that happen that day was that the car that had to pick up the bride was late more than one hour, something was telling that will be a different party for all of us.
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